Post by Deleted on May 10, 2014 0:28:56 GMT
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Warrior, Fireheart, Semaj
May 10, 2014 0:28:56 GMT
 "a small quote here about your character, it must be one line." Character Profile | ✦ NICKNAME - Sem
✦ ALLIANCE - Lunarisclan
✦ AGE - Seventeen 17
✦ HEIGHT - 65 Inches ✦ WEIGHT - 120
✦ ABILITY - Controls and focus his power through music which connects to his soul and flows through his body | Character Profile ✦ PERSONALITY - A Beat Blazer is a human who can channel their soul wavelength to match with the music, thus giving them special powers that they can control. He's a kind and friendly young man who helps others in need, He can be fierce and protective when someone close to him is in danger. He loves to do origami, play music with his guitar he crafted himself, cook, clean, dance and train himself. | CHARACTER BACK-STORY ✦ HISTORY - Semaj was a young 5 year old boy who likes helping and protecting others, He lived with his mother and father who loved and cared about him so much. His mother was a medic and his father was a guardian, they both taught him their skills of healing and defending others. His life was going good until that day came, the day when his entire race was burned to death. It was the night of the Midnight festival and Semaj was still at home working on his origami display until he saw a fire building around his village, He rushed down seeing his friends burn in pain screaming for help, as soon as he reaches the center of the village and saw his mother and father burning, he tried his best to heal them but there was no hope. His mother told him too run away and never look back, after escaping the fire; he swore that he will avenge his family and his race from what happened that night. A few years have passed and he arrives at a place called Lunaris and decided to join their clan so he could live a new life. |
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Post by Yumekui on May 10, 2014 2:01:52 GMT
Warrior, Fireheart, Semaj
May 10, 2014 2:01:52 GMT
YOUR APPLICATION is currently pending....
| There are a few issues with the application that I would like to address, but your character does seem quite interesting, if only there were a few more details added.
✦ PICTURE - A picture is required for your character to be accepted. Exact measurements being 430 x 150; who doesn't like a glimpse at what a character looks like?
✦ FORMAT -
The format for the thread title is: Class of Clan, Last name, FIRST NAME. I can fix it for you this time, but if you're making future characters, please keep this in mind for next time.
✦ QUOTE - What would your character say in a given situation? Right beneath your picture should be a sentence quote of something your character would most likely say. It can be random, or something with deeper meaning.
✦ ABILITY - As your ability seems fine, more details need to be supplied for a better understanding. Rather than talking about how your ability comes to be, what's needed is its affects to better understand what happens when using this ability.
✦ NAMES -
Lunarisclan is one word: one name. Please consider that, along with medics. Medics do not exist in the clans, though Menders do.
✦ HISTORY -
If your character is a warrior, they probably wouldn't be trying to heal the dying or have very little knowledge of it. Considering your character is a warrior, this doesn't add up why Semaj would want to be a warrior, and not a Mender in the clan. Also, Lunarisclan is picky about who they let in. They wouldn't allow just anyone to stroll into their territory and ask them to join.
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