Post by Deleted on Apr 28, 2014 5:57:06 GMT
"Why fight for those who won’t fight for us?"
Character Profile
| ✦ NICKNAME - Joe
✦ ALLIANCE - Solarisclan
✦ AGE - 25
✦ HEIGHT – 5’10
✦ WEIGHT – 163 pounds
✦ ABILITY - Mind Control. | Character Profile ✦ PERSONALITY – Joseph is a very smart person, though sometimes too smart for his own good as he expects other people to be on his level. He tends to use sarcasm on mostly everyone but this can be good humor or to sometimes he insult stupid people. He is always willing to help people in need, especially if it’s a medical need. Though he’s rarely angered by normal circumstances he does not tolerate talk of relying on Gods. He enjoys being around people, as some people have come to rely on him.
| CHARACTER BACK-STORY ✦ HISTORY Joseph Maine was born on the grounds of Solarisclan, his mother was a Mender and his father a Hunter. They were of no significant importance to the clan other than doing their job, but they were very loved by their friends. Thanks to this Joseph grew up with many adults he considered to be his family and the children of those adults were like cousins to him which to him was very important since he was an only child. He loved his parents and they loved him back; he would sometimes learn a few things about hunting, but he was mostly interested in the healing practices of his mother. Though some fathers want their sons to be warriors, Joseph’s father accepted his dreams of wanting to save lives. Joseph had the happiest childhood he could imagine, until someone took that away from him.
In his early teen years the solarisclan was struck with massive heat wave that lasted for months. This was said to have been brought upon by the goddess who was not satisfied with the solarisclan current state in the war. The heat wave dried up a lot of the water, brought illness to the clan and shortened the food supply. Many clan members died, including Joseph’s parent, but Joseph survived. Many children died through the heat wave, their body not being able to hold on, so every child that survived was considered a miracle sparred by the goddess for she had important plans for them in the future. But Joseph knew the truth, it was not the goddess who saved him, it was his parents. Using their last remaining water and medicine they gave it all to Joseph so that he could live. This goddess that everyone worshiped was not a savior, she was murderer, who seemed to enjoy killing off the weak just for her amusement. Now Joseph had new goal in his life, he would save the weak, he would save those people who meant nothing to this so called goddess. However one questioned remained in the air, was Joseph really going against the goddess’s will, or was he chosen by the goddess to save lives in the future?
After this incident Joseph became an apprentice to the Menders and dedicated himself to the books. He would study everything there was to know about the plants, the berries and how to treat all kinds of injuries. Then he became a full fledged Mender of his clan to help save as many lives as possible and at the age of 25 has become one of the best Menders in the clan. |
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Post by Dorothia on Apr 28, 2014 19:12:12 GMT
YOUR APPLICATION is currently pending....
| ✦ GENERAL - Before I get into the minor issues, I would just like to say I love your app! It was well written and I love that you added a new prospect of simply not believing in the goddesses!
✦ CLAN NAME - It's easy to miss this so it's alright. Lunarisclan and Solarisclan are one word names, not nouns. So it should be "Solarisclan" and not "The Solaris Clan."
✦ HISTORY - Your history was great! Like I said earlier, I love the idea of not believing in the goddesses. However, I would simply like to point out that Lalonia is a kingdom, there are no schools. He can not graduate at the top of his class and there is no particular amount of time it takes for an apprentice to become a full fledged member. I would just like you to fix this bit.
✦ THREAD TITLE - This one you don't have to fix since it's your first time. However, for next time, make sure you put your thread title as "Class of Clan, Last Name, FIRST NAME."
✦ AVATAR - If you want help with this one I'd be glad to give it. Your avatar on the left should be 210x420 in side. I can re-size it for you if you want!
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Whee! New skinning ideas are coming to me!
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played by
LUNA
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Post by Dorothia on Apr 28, 2014 19:46:35 GMT
CONGRATULATIONS, YOUR APPLICATION HAS BEEN ACCEPTED!
| ✦ LAST THING - Your application was accepted! You may now begin role playing with others, feel free to set up a plotter in the plotters board to instigate a few plots! Don't forget to post your face claim! |
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Whee! New skinning ideas are coming to me!
YEARS OLD
played by
LUNA
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