Post by Deleted on Apr 27, 2014 3:30:37 GMT
"a small quote here about your character, it must be one line."
CHARACTER PROFILE | ✦ NICKNAME - Mathos Draenek
✦ ALLIANCE - Lunarisclan
✦ AGE - 18/19ish
✦ HEIGHT - 6' 1"
✦ WEIGHT - 180 lbs.
✦ ABILITY - Has a keen ability to manipulate fire much like a dragon can. He can control the temperature of the fire, and be able to consume it as food or energy. He lights his hands with fire, and uses it to his will.
* 2nd Ability (just in case the first cant be used) - Has an ability to draw runes and magic circles. The variety of magic runes and circles he can make is almostomnipotent. They can be helpful or harmful.
| CHARACTER PROFILE ✦ PERSONALITY - Mathos is someone is someone who is not good with words and can be quite be direct. This is due to him not having many friends and closing others off, due to a dark past. As such, he can come off as a rude person to others. Sometimes,he can come off as a rude person to others. Sometimes, he actually seems to enjoy angering and teasing people as well. Also, from time to time, Mathos can be quite overconfident thinking he can do things others cannot. He is almost always a calm and collected character, rarely showing any signs of distress. When in a battle, he becomes incredibly fierce and aggressive. Sometimes, his fierceness is up to the point where he loses control of himself and is even unable to recall what he had done. However, Mathos is actually a kind person, but he's misunderstood. He refuses to abandon another person in trouble. These kind of acts have earned him the respect and sometimes affection from many girls. Mathos, unlike other guys, is not very dense and can tell when someone is lying or is going to confess something to him. He is also a very emotional person and lets his emotions control him from time to time. This "defect" worries his friends and allies as Mathos is someone who would let guilt ruin his life, if not comforted. But, Mathos is a very committed person, a man with incredibly strong resolve, he will do anything and everything in his power to accomplish something that's important to him, without hesitation.
| CHARACTER BACK-STORY ✦ HISTORY - Mathos joined LunarisClan from his curiosity of mountains and caves. Before that he was just a wandering nomad, who explored the forests. Now he has proven himself, to be one of the clan's most formidable fighters, and is a man to be reckoned with. He knows the mountains like the back of his hand, thus making him an expert navigator.
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Post by Dorothia on Apr 27, 2014 4:35:01 GMT
YOUR APPLICATION is currently pending....
| ✦ GENERAL - First of all, I'd like to say, your character sounds very interesting and your application is very well written! There are, however, a few tidbits wrong with it.
✦ NICKNAME - Your nickname can not be your name. It wouldn't be a nickname then.
✦ ABILITY - First off, I'd like to say that it sounds very much like Natsu from Fairy Tail. Being able to absorb fire as energy or food is just not necessary here in Lalonia. Being able to manipulate the ability is acceptable enough.
✦ ABILITY 2nd - Runes are not written in the Abilities List, which can be found in the guide book board. Omnipotence, even if it's only near omnipotence, is not allowed here. It's too strong.
✦ PERSONALITY - There isn't much wrong with this, except for the parts where you repeat the same sentence twice. Also, it would be better to say that he can sense a lie, but it doesn't work all the time. Other people may want to lie for a certain plot, this would defeat their purpose.
✦ HISTORY - Keep in mind that Lunarisclan is located inside mountains while Solarisclan is situated in the middle of a forest. Both clans are entirely separate, meaning, no person from a certain clan can know about the other's area. If you lived in Lunarislcan for many years, you wouldn't know about Solarisclan's territory because they are quite protective.
Unless you meant your character, during his loner days, resided in Solarisclan territory, that might be fine. I'll have to ask Yume to look at this first though.
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Whee! New skinning ideas are coming to me!
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