Post by Deleted on Apr 6, 2014 17:08:44 GMT
 "My time is limited." CHARACTER PROFILE
| ✦ NICKNAME - Racchi (Not a currently used nickname.)
✦ ALLIANCE - Solarisclan
✦ AGE - 18
✦ HEIGHT - 5'9 inch
✦ WEIGHT - 132 Ib
✦ ABILITY - Light which can be used for offensive and defensive means. Offensively, can create particles to charge up so it could emit beams, waves or even imitate weapons like a sword. Defensively, can be built up into a shield, reducing the damage like any other shield can. | CHARACTER PROFILE ✦ PERSONALITY - No motivation
-Calm
-Sympathetic
-Creative
-Serious
-Honest
-Sadistic
-Cold
-Dull
-Laid-back
-Antipathy | CHARACTER BACK-STORY ✦ HISTORY - Before he arrived at the Solaris clan, Ra was the head of the Akuo family which was a family of nigh-omnipotent. His parents were assassinated by the unknown which triggered an event after the massacre. His ancestors diminished, his brothers were kidnapped and his sisters fled from the scene out of fear. The family separated so Ra had no choice but to partake his own path, which had led him to the Solaris Clan. |
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Post by Dorothia on Apr 7, 2014 0:17:54 GMT
YOUR APPLICATION is currently pending.... | ✦ MINI PROFILE & PICTURES - Your mini profile avatar should be 420 x 210 in size for it to look right and in your application, please follow the size listed. In your mini profile, your full name should be displayed in the top. If you need help finding how to change it, I'll be glad to provide it.✦ CLAN - Do keep in mind that the clan names are Solarisclan and Lunarisclan. They are one word, not two. I'd like you to fix that and match the corresponding sentence together. Instead of "Before he arrived at the Solaris clan" it should be "Before he arrived at Solarisclan."
✦ ABILITY - I am a little conflicted about the defensive side of your ability. It seems a little too overpowered to me since you can phase any any major organs whenever convenient. I'm going to redirect Yumekui on this for a second opinion. I'm leaning more on the no side.
✦ CHARACTER FAMILY - I considered letting this slide because your offensive side of your ability does not seem to be as overpowering, but after consulting with Yumekui I decided against it. Due to the near limitless numbers of effects that go with nigh omnipotence, I would like you to change it. It's too powerful and honestly, you won't need it in Lalonia.
✦ HISTORY - I really like your history! If you could go more in depth, as I am curious as to what the full story is, that would be great. This is a suggestion though, feel free to let it pass. I just thought it was a good idea. |
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Whee! New skinning ideas are coming to me!
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